Class #7

First off, I talked about Empire of the Sun by J.G. Ballard and A Heartbreaking Work of Staggering Genius by David Eggars. If you want to read that book, try to get the paperback edition because he changed it between editions.

We discuss "Lives on the Boundaries."

Grammar practice: coordination and subordination, again.

Peer Review of draft #1 of the Remembering Essay.

Beginnings: examples of hooks famous, infamous, good and bad. Here are some by Mitchell Melville , Dickens, and the man himself, Bulwer-Lytten. And then there is Solzhenitsyn.

Homework

1. Read Alice Walker's "Beauty: When the Other Dancer is the Self" pages 117-124 in Reid.

2. Write Draft #2 of your Remembering Essay. Now is the time to focus in on your dominant idea and make sure that you are having the effect you desire.

3. Bring examples of three different beginnings of books or articles to class. They can be either effective or ineffective hooks, in your estimation. When you have your journal back, you will list what these are in your journal.

4. Complete the punctuation handout.

5. Two vocabulary words (to add to your journal when you have it back).