Draft #2 Long Observation

Get out your Writer's Page from Draft #1 and attach to Draft #2 with new comment sheets.

Review of sentences:

Coordination =    s    v       ,  fanboys     s       v  .


Subordination =        Sub. Conj.    s       v    ,     s        v      . 
                                                         or
                                   S       v           sub. conj.    s      v     .

Do what the Writer's Page tells you to do with your draft #2.  Then we exchange.

When you are done, you upload your electronic file of your draft in Moodle.

Homework:

1.  Letters are due tomorrow.  Make sure they are formatted correctly, or I'll hand them back to you.  MLA heading, font size 12, Times New Roman, Genre/Purpose/Audience/Subject Line to start.

2.  TWFTD:  tough