Draft #1 Kickstarter Due

First of all, we check yesterday's grammar work.

Today is about giving feedback. YOU are the audience, so you need to communicate to each other what YOU find effective. Politely. Also, remember to focus on the CAMPAIGN, not the idea. How can the presentation be MORE effective?

Note: the purple comment sheets earn YOU points. Be detailed and thoughtful.

ALSO, you may write ON the draft you read with your REACTIONS. This is a rough draft, so DO NOT PROOFREAD or edit -- just provide reactions/ input/ ideas.

Useful comments on a draft:    

What colors? How much? When will I get it? Why...? What does x mean? More info needed here...How does x work? I want THIS reward! Don't you need money for x?

Homework:

1. Use today's feedback and get your paper ready for Thursday, when DRAFT 2 is due. Have Draft 2 be as close to perfect as possible, so people can help with editing and proofreading, as well as organization.

2. If you want MY feedback, send me an email (kloden@southeast.edu) with your draft attached.

3. Daybooks are due Friday as well. "Language Use in Kickstarter" is part of your daybook grade.

4. TWFTD: hoax