Revising Again

I return your Summary/Response papers.  In your daybook, answer these questions:

1.  What was the greatest strength of this paper? (you figure one out)

2.  What was one weakness?

3.  Where did you lose the most points?

4.  Look at your grade sheet on your Long Observation paper (blue).  Record here your grade on the Long Observation paper and this paper.  What is the difference?  Why did your score improve (or not)?

Now we're going to use a forum in Moodle.  You will go to our class in Moodle, open the forum that's under your Problem/Solution paper upload, and post your thesis statement from this paper there. {You use a button labeled "Add a new discussion topic." Your subject should be the title of your paper; then paste your thesis into the text box.}

When you have done that, you may work on your draft.  Upload it as Part 2 WITH the highlighting, but remove the highlighting to print it for class Wednesday. The Final Version is due Thursday.

Homework:

1.  Finish revising Draft 2 for tomorrow.  It will need to be uploaded in Moodle as Part 2 with highlights. Remove highlights for readers tomorrow.

2.  TWFTD:  theft in the OED.