Draft #2 Due Kickstarter on Paper

Here's a link of interest about English as a world language: http://www.washingtonpost.com/blogs/worldviews/wp/2015/04/23/the-worlds-languages-in-7-maps-and-charts/?tid=pm_pop_b

Print ONE copy of your Draft #2.

Get out the purple Writer's Page from Draft #1 to pass around with your draft and the comment sheets. Everyone reads and comments on TWO drafts.

Please look at the back of the Writer's Page, and read from top to bottom through the "Excellent" column.

Today you will be put in groups of three to exchange papers. Make sure that you pass your papers around the circle, so each person does the other two.

Now you are reading closely for details that need work, and ways to help each other earn the "excellent" in each category. You may help each other with spelling and punctuation details, so you can write on the draft as well as filling out the comment sheet.

Prepare your daybook to hand in.

Homework:

1. Prepare your Final Version for Tuesday. On Monday we'll discuss how to cite any pictures you used, and I'll return Solo Paper #1.