Friday, November 14, 2014

Final Improvements

Open your Summary/ Eval/ Response paper in Turnitin (in Moodle). NOW you can click on the middle button and see comments I have made, and see some proofreading by the software.

Use EasyBib to create a Works Cited page.

For your daybook today, find one sentence using coordination and one using subordination from your own paper, and copy them down.

Check your daybook list of errors for the paper returned to you. What should you look for in THIS paper?

Last ten minutes:  The next paper you write is called the Problem/ Solution paper. This weekend, as you finish up your Summary/ Eval/ Response paper, be thinking about a problem that you'd like to think more deeply about solving.

Here are a selection of sources that point to problems. You could use one of these, or come up with your own. Note: I prohibit gun-control related papers.

"Humans Need Not Apply" video by CGP Grey.

"Injustice in Ferguson, Long Before Michael Brown" from Bloomberg's Business Week.

"The Net Neutrality Debate in 3 Minutes" by Hank G.

"Incarceration Nation" By CNN

"The Skills Gap" by Siemens

"Alcohol is Still the Deadliest Drug in the United States, and It’s Not Even Close" The Washington Post

Daybooks are due.

Homework:

1. Final Version of your Summary/ Eval/ Response due Monday with ALL tan sheets.

2. Look through the problem examples and be thinking about your next paper.

3. TWFTD:  none

Thursday, November 13, 2014

Draft #2 Summary/ Evaluation/ Response Due Today

Today you read and comment on two drafts. Some of you will read drafts by the same person so that you are reading about the same article that you wrote about.

Before class tomorrow, upload this draft into our class in Moodle using the Turnitin link.

Homework:

1. Upload Draft 2 in Moodle.

2. Have your daybook ready to turn in.

3. TWFTD:  plagiarism in OED ( can you figure out the original meaning in Latin?)

Wednesday, November 12, 2014

Ch. 22 Continued

Due to the failure of text2mindmap for SOME students, we'll do something a bit different with the same information.

1. Open a Word file, and give it the standard heading for this class.

2. Type in the NINE sections of Ch. 22, and number them.

3. Next to each, you will write a short paraphrase (in your own words) explaining what the section is about. Use one or two COMPLETE sentences.

4. Space, indent, and add ONE quote from that section that also explains what it is about (copy/paste from your mindmap, if you have one).

5. When you have completed this for all nine sections, every section will have a paraphrase and a quote.

6. Save the file where you can access it.

7. Go to Moodle and upload the file into Turnitin, which will be found in the highlighted section of our class. I'll show you how.

8. In Turnitin, hopefully their software will show whether you're doing a good job paraphrasing this chapter.

Tomorrow, you will upload your Draft #2 into Turnitin, so that we can look at it there in class on Friday.

Homework:

1. Prepare Draft #2 of your Summary/ Evaluation/ Response, due tomorrow.

2. TWFTD:  revise in OED.

Tuesday, November 11, 2014

Draft #1 Due of Summary/ Evaluation/ Response with Feedback

We look at the example paper I wrote about the Pat Bourne article.

Fill out the Writer's Page about your draft.

I pass out the comment sheets, and you gather into groups. Read and fill out sheets.

Homework:

1. Work on revising your draft. Draft #2 is due Thursday.

2. TWFTD:  your choice from Bedford Ch. 22.

Monday, November 10, 2014

How Writers Develop Ideas

Open up The Bedford Guide to Chapter 22.

Now click on this link: https://www.text2mindmap.com/

This chapter is full of information that can help you create a paper AND analyze the writing of others.

Your task is to read and outline this chapter using text2mindmap.  I show you how to use the thing.

The red heading from the book will be headings in the mindmap. Under each you should type at least TWO quotes from the section that are key "explainers" of the heading.

I strongly recommend that you read a section, then type your notes, then go on to the next. We will save and work on these in class again Wednesday.

Homework:

1. Draft 1 due tomorrow of your Summary/ Evaluation/ Response paper.

2. TWFTD: evocative from Bedford Ch. 22.