Tuesday, November 17, 2009

Class #13

You turn in your final version of the Summary/Response #1.

How DO you write a good ending/conclusion?

Grammar editing practice.

We discuss writing techniques for the Summary/Response #2 of an image.

You write a practice Five Paragraph Essay using an old prompt (in your journal).

I will collect your journals for the second journal check on Thursday.

Homework:

1. Read in Reid pages 280-281 and 338-340. We are going on to the NEXT paper in these readings.

2. In your journal take one full page of notes describing the image you have chosen for your paper.

3. Create Draft #1 of your Summary/Response to an Image and bring it to class.

4. In your journal make a note of either a song or story or poem or whatever that you like that has an effective ending. Feel free to post them in the comments section of this blog (use Anonymous but include your name in the post).

4. Two vocabulary words
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7 comments:

  1. John GeorgeNovember 18, 2009 at 3:11 PM

    Thought this clip from one of my favorite movies had a great ending.

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=17z2dcCCdDe

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  2. AnonymousNovember 18, 2009 at 4:49 PM

    hey loden, i dont have ur email, so i hope this works, but yesturday i was so excided to get out and hang out with my friends and realized that i didnt give u my paper...is there anything i can do?
    -cam cash

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  3. AnonymousNovember 19, 2009 at 10:49 AM

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-QBOJZolP6o this video just stops with the saying that is the transition (in this department). the song just ends which is just straight forward.

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  4. Mike YangNovember 19, 2009 at 3:47 PM

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0F_mt5616no

    Live performance of a Finnish A cappella sextet singing their interpretation of Finnish pop song "Kivinen Tie" (The Rocky Road)

    I could not find an official translation, but the poetic idea behind the song is as follows:

    If you should wrong me once, I'll vanish like sand.

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  5. Mike YangNovember 19, 2009 at 3:48 PM

    Sorry. I posted that video because I thought it had a good ending by the way. =)

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  6. AnonymousNovember 19, 2009 at 5:45 PM

    Good ending http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SODg_HYsiZk

    Stewart

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  7. Amy MorrisDecember 1, 2009 at 11:45 AM

    This is the video I'm using for my S/R #2 It has a great ending.
    http://youtube.com/watch?v=SCU1JYmGxcA

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