Return of the Papers

Commas -- style or rules?

I hand you your papers.

In your journal, list one comment on your paper that surprised you and one thing (or more) that you already knew.

Also make an error list. List the number of the error and then use the Everyday Writer ( Top Twenty) and write an explanation of what you did.

I hand out another example of writing about memories; read that one, and, if you wish, look at this example of a writer near the end of his career. That's E.B.White's "Death of a Pig."

Homework:

1. Prepare the final version of your memory essay. Bring all drafts and comment sheets to class Monday.