Editing and Intellectual Property

Short essay on observation.  I return yours.  You read and score it in your daybook.

Give it a score from 5 down to 2 in these categories:
Beginning
Main Idea
Organization
Development
Conclusion
Punc/Sp/Grammar

Then decide on an overall score which combines all these:

Then I give you your score sheet.  In your daybook comment on the differences between scores, and my comments, and what you think about your essay as you read it now.

Now, you get the new topic for a short essay, due tomorrow.
 
We look at two videos.  The first is a little radical. The second is very radical.


Then,


TurnItIn for your Informing MLA Style draft:  upload and edit.  Ask me any questions you might have about editing.

Homework:

1.  The Final Version of your Informing paper is due tomorrow.  Bring all related sheets.

2.  During class you will type up a short  five paragraph essay on Intellectural Property -- see the prompt.

3.  No words this week.