Draft 2 Summary/Analysis

I return your Long Observation papers.
Look over the scoring grid and the comments on the paper.

In your daybook:
1.  Copy down the strengths and weaknesses I listed.
2.  Look at the scores in each category and list your two hightest and two lowest categories.
3.  In all the comments you see, list one that surprised you and explain.
4.  Make a tally of all your grammar/usage issues. Include sp//ro/cs/frag/tense/cap/commas:coord-sub

I check Works Cited pages with your drafts.

Get into your same groups and read today's drafts.  These are also to be uploaded into Moodle/TurnItIn today, for work tomorrow.

Homework:

1.  Upload your Draft 2 into Moodle/TurnItIn Part 2.

2.  Begin preparing your final version, due Wednesday.  Have grammar questions for me tomorrow.  The goal is to fix the errors that were most common in your  Long Observation paper.

3. TWFTD:   your choice from another class.