Draft #2 Due of Observation/ Description

Get out your Writer's Page from Draft #1 and attach to Draft #2 with new comment sheets.

Review of sentences:

Coordination:    I was late, and I missed the beginning.
I was late, so I missed the beginning.

Subordination:      I missed the beginning because I was late.
Because I was late, I missed the beginning.
 

Do what the Writer's Page tells you to do with your draft #2. Then we exchange.

When you are done, you upload your electronic file of your draft in Moodle.

Homework:

1. Look at your feedback. Whether or not the feedback is useful, it's your job  to figure out what will make the paper better.

2. TWFTD: idiot in OED