Example Student Paper

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Thinkwrite: Look at the pictures on pages 134-135 in Bedford. Describe what you see and write about possible problems these pictures illustrate.

On the board....

We look at a student's paper, "It's Not Just a Bike" pages 190-191 Bedford. You have the following questions to answer in your daybook:

• 1. What problem does Lacey Taylor want solved in her essay “It’s Not Just a Bike”?
• 2. ListTaylor’s five proposed solutions.
• 3. Which two solutions do you think would be MOST effective? Explain.
• 5. Which two solutions do you think would be LEAST effective? Explain.
• 6. When Taylor proposed the solutions you identified in question 5 above, did she acknowledge in any way that there might be difficulties? Quote her statements that point out potential difficulties with either of those solutions.
• 7. What difficulties do YOU foresee with some of her solutions?

Homework:

1. Problem/ Solution Draft #1 is due Tuesday. Begin drafting over the weekend. On Monday class time will be used to create a "mind map" of your problem. If you wish to do so ahead of time, go to https://www.text2mindmap.com/ and save your work.

2. TWFTD: rehabilitation in OED