Draft #2 Kickstarter on Paper

Here's a link of interest about English as a world language: http://www.washingtonpost.com/blogs/worldviews/wp/2015/04/23/the-worlds-languages-in-7-maps-and-charts/?tid=pm_pop_b

Print ONE copy of your Draft #2.

Get out the purple Writer's Page from Draft #1 to pass around with your draft and the new comment sheets. Everyone reads and comments on TWO drafts.

Please look at the back of the Writer's Page, and read from top to bottom through the "Excellent" column.

Now you are reading closely for details that need work, and ways to help each other earn the "excellent" in each category. You may help each other with spelling and punctuation details, so you can write on the draft as well as filling out the comment sheet.

When you finish, please read the above link more carefully. Pay special attention to Section 7.

Homework:

1. Have your daybook ready to hand in.

2. The final version of your Kickstarter on Paper is due Tuesday Aug. 11.

2. TWFTD: a fancy word of your choice