Observation Draft #1

Today you practice more analytical thinking.

#1 Read and React: use ! and ?

#2 Analyze: Are the details clear? Do I understand and "see" the scene?

#3 Evaluate: What works well?   give !!! What could be improved?  give ???

AND do this in a supportive fashion. I'm awarding you points on the quality of your input.

You may write positive remarks and questions on the draft; NO CORRECTIONS.

You will fill out the blue "Writer's Sheet" (handout). I'll pass around 2 "Reader's Sheets" that will be filled out about your draft. When we're done, all these sheets will go home with you, and you will revise your draft into Draft #2.

Homework:

1. Make changes/additions to your draft. Draft #2 typed is due Tuesday. How will you save it? On Tuesday Draft 2 must be available electronically in order to upload it to TurnItIn in Moodle. BACK UP A FLASH DRIVE!

2.  Remember on Wednesday your two letters are due (Short Project #2).  They are to be MLA format, font size 12, Times New Roman.  If that is not correct, I'll hand them back to you.

3.  Before class Monday watch this 10 minute video on the language. There will be questions on Monday.

4. TWFTD:  analyze

5.  For the electro-mechanical crowd.