Today is about giving feedback. YOU are the audience, so you need to communicate to each other what YOU find effective. Politely.
Note: the purple comment sheets earn YOU points. Be detailed and thoughtful.
ALSO, you may write ON the draft you read with your REACTIONS. This is a rough draft, so DO NOT PROOFREAD or edit -- just provide reactions/ input/ ideas.
Useful comments on a draft:
What colors? How much? When will I get it? Why...? What does x mean? More info needed here...How does x work? I want THIS reward! You lost me here...
Homework:
1. Use today's feedback and get your paper ready for Friday, when DRAFT 2 is due. Have Draft 2 be as close to perfect as possible, so people can help with editing and proofreading, as well as organization.
2. If you want MY feedback, send me an email (kloden@southeast.edu) with your draft attached.
3. TWFTD: hoax
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