Today you read and comment on each other's drafts to practice for revising your own draft.
Revision = to re-see.
Analyze: Are the details clear? Do I understand and "see" the scene?
Synthesize: Does it all add up to make the point?
Evaluate: What works well? What needs to be improved?
Copy the above in your daybook. Then you will fill out the blue "Writer's Sheet" (handout). I'll pass around 2 "Reader's Sheets" that will be filled out about your draft. When we're done, all these sheets will go home with you, and you will revise your draft into Draft #2.
Homework:
1. Make changes/additions to your draft. Draft #2 typed is due Thursday. How will you save it? NO FLASH DRIVES!
2. TWFTD: tough
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