Draft #1 Due Observation/ Description

Today you practice more analytical thinking.

#1 Read and React.

#2 Analyze: Are the details clear? Do I understand and "see" the scene? Ask questions ON THE DRAFT.

#3 Evaluate:  Remark when something works well. If something is confusing or not clear, ASK A SPECIFIC QUESTION that will help the writer understand what it is you don't get.

AND do all this in a supportive fashion. I'm awarding you points on the quality of your input.

You write remarks and questions on the draft; NO PROOFREADING. This is a draft.

You will fill out the blue "Writer's Sheet" (handout). I'll pass around 2 "Reader's Sheets" that will be filled out about your draft. When we're done, all these sheets will go home with you, and you will revise your draft into Draft #2.

Homework:

1. Make changes/additions to your draft. Draft #2 is due Tuesday July 30. How will you save it? On Tuesday Draft 2 must be available electronically in order to upload it to TurnItIn in Moodle. BACK UP A FLASH DRIVE IN EMAIL!

2. TWFTD: analyze