Drafting

I return Legos. We talk about your directions and feedback.

Thinkwrite: As you look over the Lego papers, please review the kinds of comments your builders wrote for you. What did they say, and how did you use their comments? What was actually useful?

Look at page 89 in Bedford.

Apostrophe Abuse ?

You have time to work at writing your first draft. Due tomorrow, type and print 2 copies.

Homework:

1. Bring Draft 1 of the Observation/Description paper to class, make TWO COPIES. Readers will write on the draft, like they did with the Legos.

2. TWFTD: context